I would like to go to the Grand Canyon. The environment would be so much different than it is in Maryland. The Grand Canyon seems like such an interesting place. It is known for its colorful landscape and overwhelming size. The Grand Canyon is carved by the Colorado River. The weather changes according to the elevation. It will be hot if I visit during the summer. I would take a good pair of sneakers or boots, a lot of water, clothes, and money for this trip because I am going to explore the wildlife of the Grand Canyon.
My grandparents live in Arizona, so I can stay with them during my visit. I would get there by a military plane with my family. We have flown to California and Hawaii over the last two summers, so we could drive from the closest military base to my grandparents’ house. I will probably be in the Grand Canyon National Park during most of my visit. They have tours that will teach us all we need to know. I am expecting to take many pictures during this trip. This will be an unforgettable experience!
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Good work. You have completed all of the assignments, but your blogs are too brief. You need to tell the reader more than they already know. Beef up your paragraphs with specific details that draw reader's attention.
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Great job! I really enjoyed looking at your blog! I like how it is really colorful, perfect for the Into the Wild theme! I thought the blog posts were good too!
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Good writing. This blog makes me want to visit the Grand Canyon myself. But try going into more detail about what you would do when visiting. Explain more about what kind of tours they have and what kind of things you might learn. Also, when you say that you would be exploring the wildlife, explain what kind of wildlife is there. That would be interesting. Overall, good job!
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